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If I found you, on your knees,
trying desperately to collect the shattered pieces of your heart-
I would kneel beside you and help you pick them up.
I would not cast a blind eye,
and pretend I had not seen you.

If I saw that your hands had been cut,
by the very shards of hope you were trying so hard to gather-
I would take your hands in mine, and hold them until the pain subsided.
Then I would kiss every wound- no matter how big or how small,
until I was sure you would be able to use your hands again.

If you were crying from the fear that you'd never be able to pick up everything,
I would hold you until your tears stopped, and I would comfort you with gentle words.
But I would not lie to you- I would never lie.
The heart is a frail thing- once shattered, it can never be fully repaired.
Parts will remain missing, and the mended hope will always bear cracks.

If we found that we'd gathered all that we were able,
and that there were a fine powder remaining of what we could not collect.
I would blow that powder into the wind and have you watch it fly.
Then I would tell you that because part of you was with the wind,
part of you would remain forever free from hardship.

If you were in need of aid-
if you needed help putting the pieces of your heart back together.
I would stay beside you and help you put every last piece into its proper place.
Then, I would lock your frail heart in a protective case,
and give it to you with the key to unlock it.

Then, after I had done all of that, I would turn to leave-
but if you tried to prevent me from going, I would stop.
If only to hear a simple thank you and goodbye, I would stop.
However, should you ask me why I'd stopped to help you in the first place,
I would gladly answer you in honesty.

My answer would simply be,
“I was in your place once, and none stopped to help me,
so for sake of preventing that sorrow in others,
I will stop to help them whenever I see their suffering.”
Then I would smile at you earnestly and wait for your response.

I assume that past that point,
we would talk and socialize with each-other for a while,
until we came to our understanding.
You would learn that despite my outward appearance,
that I bear the same scars as you on the inside of my being.

Then, after all was said and done, we would embrace.
As for what I think may happen beyond that point-
I would gladly remain friend to you and call you as my kin.
However, that would all depend of course,
on if you would like me by your side until the bitter end of things.
I actually started this a week or so ago, I've only just found the drive to finish it. This is dedicated to someone- :icondeath-riot: I hope you like it, "Little brother".
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planeta99 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
I remember that my life was characterizer by sadness and heartbreak...but now, thanks for my characters, the creepypasta and my new friends (you) i feel much better...although sometimes, seen others sud, i feel sad top...i feel a real crap!
I feel real helpless in not Boeing abile to make the others smile...you did a super job, compliments
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
Thank you.
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planeta99 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
But....a out death-roit...what did you say?
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
What do you mean, what did I say?
When he called himself a whore and I made him explain himself to me, I told him he was not such a person and that he deserved better.
When I found that he was covered in scars I told him not to look at himself with a hateful, disgusted gaze because he is a beautiful person.
I continue to tell him that I care- and I will admit that I've come to love him.
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planeta99 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
I have read that be...is sick...si it true?
Be look Like a very nice person...you're right to tell him to not fall already...he is very lucky
But i neve had anyone that did cheer for me, noone who really belived me or even if i was wrong, noone sad here to smile at me telling me that everything was alright...i think it's only my fault... i'm the error in the world
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
(This might be some tough love)
There is nothing wrong with you. Anyone- I don't care if they'er a stranger or someone close to you- who makes you feel as if you are a waste of space has no business being in the world, because those who spend their time putting others down have no business being in the world!
You are not an error- there is NOTHING wrong with you!
You are a human being, someone with wonderful feelings and emotions, and a heart that can be easily hurt. 
Don't you EVER believe any senseless negativity directed at you, got it?
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planeta99 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Yes...thank you...i feel muuuuuuuuuuuuuuch better now!
And i promise that i will neve be sad again!
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014   Writer
*Hugs* Atta girl~
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Mart1no777 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've found this meaningful. Recently had my heart shattered so I do recognize ...
Very touching
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
My heart shattered when I was young and no one was around to help me pick it back up. I've made it a life goal to do for others what was never done for me.
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