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Loss.
Tis the saddest,
most regretful and uncontrollable part of life.

Tis Painful.
Leaving us to question,
every aspect of what could or might have been.

However.
In the end,
it is the happiest of pains.

Because,
had there been no love. No joy.
Then the loss would never have brought pain.

Tis true.
Though you've lost the future,
you can never replace whats in the past.

Nothing,
can ever undo what has already been.
You cannot lose what you've already experienced.

Memories.
Hold true to them and never let them go.
Keep the love alive by just keeping the memories in mind.

Photographs.
Drawings, paintings, poems, stories.
So many ways to portray that love of what is here no more.

Express,
that simple and pure love-
because in that way, it keeps who and what you've lost alive.

Keep,
the memories in mind.
Do what you can to never forget all that made you smile.

The pain,
will lessen as time passes.
You'll be left with a bittersweet feeling above all else.

Remember.
What has been done, is done.
Spend your time remembering the joy, rather than drowning in the sorrow.

So smile.
Hold tightly to the joy you felt before your loss-
and remember that you've many who'll care enough to do the same for you.
A comfort gift to my beloved :iconmionofdeath:, who recently found one of her cats dead... I don't want to dwell far into it, but, I know how bad it feels to lose something you love.

I hope the poem acts more as inspiration to hold tightly to the happy memories you hold, rather than as something that kicks you while your down. I really want you to know that even though you've lost something very precious to you, you still have the past. Nothing can take that from you as long as you remember to put the happy memories out in the open, for all to see and know.
I'm here for you love, so are all others who care for you.
I hope you like the poem...
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Valerie-Red Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Writer
That was beautiful! I really wanna hug you right now! why are you so far away?! Waaaah!
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
Uhm, because we live in different parts of the world?...

Anyways, I'm glad you liked my poem. I can do them really well when given the proper inspiration. I've seen people cry after reading them.
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Valerie-Red Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Writer
I know. I just got a little sad reading your poem and then even more sad, realizing I could never come over and comfort you. nothing worse than feeling useless. even if your works make me cry, you won't know because we're so far apart and I can't do anything other than tell you that you're amazing. in the end I'm not there for you and it makes me sad.
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
Yeah, I know that feeling all to well... There are a number of people I've spoken to online that I've just wanted comfort and meet in real life, even if its just once...
As for my works, my main goal is to reach people on an emotional level- and I seem to be doing a good job with that so far.
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MionOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*tears up and bit* I loved it Sar.. *tackle hug*
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
*Squeaks and holds you tightly* Don't cry love!..
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MionOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*buries my face in the crook of your neck* it's hard not to Sar..
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
*Kisses the top of you head* I know it is Ray, but, you need to stay strong... Chloe wouldn't want you to cry over her, would she?...
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MionOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*snuggles close to you* I'll try not to... Promise..
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youngguardian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
*Kisses you again and rubs your back* Okie..
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